A different kind of adventure

so yeah this is definatly my favorite even though theres a billion mistakes!  


But personally i love the relationship of big sister, wise teacher, mentor etc. with scootaloo and rainbow dash  
ironically scootaloo was my fav pony from previous generations because my mentor gave me a plushie of her
so i hope everyone likes it
and btw there were nearly 200 layers for this~!!! O_O
its taking forever to load -_-"

real quick before you say something:

1. scootaloos wing is drawn in but when i colored dashes hair it was covered so nm i could do its just the pose SHE STILL HAS THE WINGS!
2. i know tank is technicality a tortoise (or so ive been told) and i know he mainly survives on land but i dont see harm in a quick swim
3. i know scootaloo is a bit off color but i got as close as i could
4. i tried to get a bubble effect since they were underwater so yeah ....BUBBLES!

besides that gimmie your opinion is there something i can improve?